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HOw To USE E-MAIL

Email: genre and appropriacy (pages 62-63)

Look at the following email written to solicit information from the website “Save the Wale”. Circle the elements that are inappropriate, and note down why they are inappropriate. Then rewrite the email in a more appropriate style.

Hi! I LIKE YOUR SITE “Save the Wale”.

im preparing for a presentation at my school about why whales are in danger of extinction J

i want u to send me some stuff about this, like brochures, posters etc!!!!!

i need it by tonite!!!!!!

CU!